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A Priest
08-16-08, 10:50 PM
your blog is fucking hilarious, just gave me a couple of proper LOL moments - someone said recently you should do a paysite where basically your just you, your camera and a proper british amateur reality angle. reading that, i reckon they are spot on.

TGITC
08-16-08, 10:57 PM
Seconded. I think its very good too...

mpk11
08-16-08, 11:13 PM
Well for a bit I did some shoots as a warped clown, I called ClownX.

At the end of the day I may have a degree

I was amassed how turned on she was .

DVT, its great, the content on the current front page is excellent

I didn't like the early post, seemed "too marketing" but the latest ones are great :alc: :) :) :)

dvtimes
08-16-08, 11:56 PM
yes, some will just be crap posts like the early ones if i canot think of aything to write, but i will try to do somthing decent every so often.

if i did it every day i think i would get fed up or ru out of things to say.

i prefer to do it whe i am in the mood.

it sort of makes me feel better too.

there is also one good thing to me, is that as i have such a bad memory, i will use it a bit as a diary too. to keep a log of what i have done. ofte i simply forget.

dvtimes
08-17-08, 10:46 PM
what do you think of todays post?

TGITC
08-17-08, 11:00 PM
what do you think of todays post?

Honest Feedback...

Its good, but a little on the long-side. Why not break it down into smaller sections, say the swimming pool changing rooms, the 'screw' story and 'playing in the coatrooms' etc, and post them as individual posts, over a period of days, alongside some fresh pics?

Then you would still have the same content, & you wouldn't need to worry about writing every day...

Finally, only a minor thing. I see you have been using a spell checker. However it has let on word slip that you use a lot. Clothes... Your spell checker has it as 'Cloths'... A Valid word, but not the word you are looking for...

But I DONT WANT TO SOUND NEGATIVE... After all, this is something people have told you that you should do for ages, and now you've started doing it, so more power to you mate... :)

dvtimes
08-17-08, 11:13 PM
Honest Feedback...

Its good, but a little on the long-side. Why not break it down into smaller sections, say the swimming pool changing rooms, the 'screw' story and 'playing in the coatrooms' etc, and post them as individual posts, over a period of days, alongside some fresh pics?

Then you would still have the same content, & you wouldn't need to worry about writing every day...

Finally, only a minor thing. I see you have been using a spell checker. However it has let on word slip that you use a lot. Clothes... Your spell checker has it as 'Cloths'... A Valid word, but not the word you are looking for...

But I DONT WANT TO SOUND NEGATIVE... After all, this is something people have told you that you should do for ages, and now you've started doing it, so more power to you mate... :)

i cut it in half, and half for monday.