View Full Version : Critique this new tour please :)
daveydude
08-21-05, 07:55 PM
I'd appreciate some constructive criticism on this:
http://tour.getdirtywithjuliet.com/tour2/
I much prefere your old one. I think that was a nice tour.
daveydude
08-21-05, 08:12 PM
I much prefere your old one. I think that was a nice tour.
Yeah the old one is a lot busier, more going on etc. We want a few alternate tours so we can figure out what converts better. This new one is my crack at having something a bit cleaner & softer - notice there's no really explicit pics, just the promise of filth when you join (a promise that is honoured I might add!).
WHOA!, they gave me a headache. I don't like the yellow on red text escpecially the get dirty bit at the top.
Also whatever has been done to the models face in the big pic on the left it looks overdone.
It really hurt my eyes, I just put the light on to see if that helped but it never. It just makes me want to x out
johnboy
08-21-05, 08:14 PM
I like it.
Easy to look at whilst keeping the surfer busy with some pretty cool pics.
daveydude
08-21-05, 08:25 PM
lol this isn't helping at all - we have "it hurt my eyes" and "it's easy to look at". It will still be easy to look at if I change the colour of the text to something softer though, and it won't hurt poor Geezer's eyes as much. I'll leave it a bit longer & see what other ppl think anyway.
Cheers for the responses btw :)
cock-a-leekie
08-21-05, 08:34 PM
I'd appreciate some constructive criticism on this:
http://tour.getdirtywithjuliet.com/tour2/
Pretty, but very tame.
I've never had much success with soft tours myself.
dvtimes
08-21-05, 08:46 PM
I like it, but it feels 'red'.
I think it you made the pic of the girl less red it would bee much easer on the eye.
TommyMac
08-21-05, 09:59 PM
I like it.
The big bouncy text looks good and the polaroids with the text on are good. The hand written type text on the paper looks really good aswell.
The italic text on the pink box is a bit hard to read and plays with my head a bit and the big picture of juliet on the side looks like someone has played with it a bit to much.
hope this helps...
A little heavy on the saturation tool in photoshop maybe?
daveydude
08-21-05, 10:49 PM
Wicked - thanks guys. The concensus seems to be that the big pic of Juliet is a bit too optimised so I'll fix that. I will sort out the yellow italic text too, it is a bit hard on the old mincers I agree.
I'll post again when i'm done making modifications.
Wicked - thanks guys. The concensus seems to be that the big pic of Juliet is a bit too optimised so I'll fix that. I will sort out the yellow italic text too, it is a bit hard on the old mincers I agree.
I'll post again when i'm done making modifications.
See, I don't just make things up for the sake of it :takethat:
Just a question Davey..
Where did you get the idea of using "Get Dirty" instead of your usual "In Bed With " :)
I wonder... hmmmm..... Maybe I should come up with a site called Sahara Gets Dirty... Nah it would never work...
daveydude
08-22-05, 02:31 AM
Just a question Davey..
Where did you get the idea of using "Get Dirty" instead of your usual "In Bed With " :)
I wonder... hmmmm..... Maybe I should come up with a site called Sahara Gets Dirty... Nah it would never work...
Umm, I think it was something to do with Juliet being dirtier than Faith (Juliet was our second site after Faith's) and we had the idea of using "inbedwith" for the softer stuff and "getdirtywith" for lovely girls like Juliet who put things up their bums on camera.
We fucked up though cos Eva is an "inbedwith" even though she puts things up her bum. No idea what happened there. Ask Aaron lol.
I might register get and getting dirty... LOL
daveydude
08-22-05, 03:05 AM
I might register get and getting dirty... LOL
lol don't worry, we don't know anyone called Sahara ;)
apart from the obvious and already mentioned overuse of photchop on images i personally don't like the pink with a "dirty" site - it's so sweet n neat .... the purple, although light, suits it better.
since i'd never buy a membership to any site, this could be rather worthless info though. :D
I like it liked the old one too.....
Yeah the old one is a lot busier, more going on etc. We want a few alternate tours so we can figure out what converts better. This new one is my crack at having something a bit cleaner & softer - notice there's no really explicit pics, just the promise of filth when you join (a promise that is honoured I might add!).
For me I have always found that if you have explicit content then its better to have an explicit tour. Let the surfers know what they are going to get. I imagine the advantage Juliet has over lots of other single girl sites out there is that she is dirtier. Seems a shame not to use that advantage in trying to sell her
Alf Garnet
08-23-05, 08:19 AM
apart from the obvious and already mentioned overuse of photchop on images i personally don't like the pink with a "dirty" site - it's so sweet n neat .... the purple, although light, suits it better.
since i'd never buy a membership to any site, this could be rather worthless info though. :D
Please try to have some small idea of what in the hell you're talking about before you try to post again.
Please try to have some small idea of what in the hell you're talking about before you try to post again.
Don't talk rubbish Alf - then there would be NO posts on this board ever :)
Please try to have some small idea of what in the hell you're talking about before you try to post again.
i'll try to. as soon as you smarten up, old man. :D
how's the blogging coming along?
cock-a-leekie
08-23-05, 12:08 PM
For me I have always found that if you have explicit content then its better to have an explicit tour. Let the surfers know what they are going to get. I imagine the advantage Juliet has over lots of other single girl sites out there is that she is dirtier. Seems a shame not to use that advantage in trying to sell her
Agreed.
The plain fact is that a hard tour will always convert better than a soft one. I'd Personally get the best/hardest pictures I have and use them for the tour. What good is it having them if no one will see them? I'd use these hard pics/vids to sell the site.
Well that's what works for me anyways.
Agreed.
The plain fact is that a hard tour will always convert better than a soft one. I'd Personally get the best/hardest pictures I have and use them for the tour. What good is it having them if no one will see them? I'd use these hard pics/vids to sell the site.
Well that's what works for me anyways.
Yep, use your best marketing tools available. If you are selling hardcore then make the tour as hardcore as you can. Just like Video covers, they are always as hard if not harder than the video.
Yep, use your best marketing tools available. If you are selling hardcore then make the tour as hardcore as you can. Just like Video covers, they are always as hard if not harder than the video.
Excellent advice and webmaster marketing 101. :drink:
NumptyNuts
08-24-05, 11:02 PM
Yeah the old one is a lot busier, more going on etc. We want a few alternate tours so we can figure out what converts better. This new one is my crack at having something a bit cleaner & softer - notice there's no really explicit pics, just the promise of filth when you join (a promise that is honoured I might add!).
Are you haivnig issues converting traffic on your juliet site then? Shes always done well for me.
As for the new tour, the cut out of her seems really full on, I think the photo set of her you have in pink 3rd pic in will sell her site.
:)
i like it better pics are nicer
daveydude
08-28-05, 03:22 PM
Heh, right the new tour is up and running in NATS. Just made the first sale - 1:14
Need lots more traffic to it though - anyone up for it?
ukwebmasters
08-28-05, 04:03 PM
that girl really needs to start sucking dick on tours, your conversions will shoot up baby ;= lmfao
aaron_sterlingcash
08-28-05, 06:21 PM
that girl really needs to start sucking dick on tours, your conversions will shoot up baby ;= lmfao
Dont we fucking know it...haha dave everyone like my tour still ;)
But the conversion speaks for itself...Paul you have always done well with her, do you think its because you do get a lot of UK traffic??
aaron_sterlingcash
08-28-05, 06:22 PM
And the reason eva isnt a getdirty is because she flatly refused it and I was sick of arguing about it.
She didnt see herself as dirty...well that did it for me pmsl
Eva also has rules what goes on a fan sign and what doesn't. ;)
NumptyNuts
08-28-05, 07:37 PM
Dont we fucking know it...haha dave everyone like my tour still ;)
But the conversion speaks for itself...Paul you have always done well with her, do you think its because you do get a lot of UK traffic??
I built my own tours and linked to your join page directly :)
Since you moved to Nats I go through your tour pages now, Im still waiting for a direct link to Ravens join page lads :)
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